Oh, wow! Thankful I read it again because I am spotting some nuances that flew past the first time. I think this is a very bold concept, Ebuka. I like the layers-within-layers. I think this is a really big idea, something uniquely yours. I really hope to see how far you take this style
I only just noticed she was sensing some details from the past, and that reality was folding upon itself little by little, like the blaksmith's iron after ceaseless forging
Interesting and melancholy.
Thanks, Sonya.
wow! awesome story.
Thanks, Lyn. Glad you enjoyed.
Oh, wow! Thankful I read it again because I am spotting some nuances that flew past the first time. I think this is a very bold concept, Ebuka. I like the layers-within-layers. I think this is a really big idea, something uniquely yours. I really hope to see how far you take this style
Thanks, Tobi.
Glad that you noticed. Tried to make a point that the recursive experience was not entirely lost on her.
I only just noticed she was sensing some details from the past, and that reality was folding upon itself little by little, like the blaksmith's iron after ceaseless forging
Excellently told! Love it!
Thanks, Dị Zahav.