Do You Get The Feeling That Something Is…

[Tobi Amida]

this story is even better the third time

[Sonya Mann]

Interesting and melancholy.

[Ebuka Igbokwe]

Thanks, Sonya.

[anisa]

wow! awesome story.

[Ebuka Igbokwe]

Thanks, Lyn. Glad you enjoyed.

[Tobi Amida]

Oh, wow! Thankful I read it again because I am spotting some nuances that flew past the first time. I think this is a very bold concept, Ebuka. I like the layers-within-layers. I think this is a really big idea, something uniquely yours. I really hope to see how far you take this style

[Ebuka Igbokwe]

Thanks, Tobi.

Glad that you noticed. Tried to make a point that the recursive experience was not entirely lost on her.

[Tobi Amida]

I only just noticed she was sensing some details from the past, and that reality was folding upon itself little by little, like the blaksmith's iron after ceaseless forging

[Gold Mike Odenigbo]

Excellently told! Love it!

[Ebuka Igbokwe]

Thanks, Dị Zahav.

[Shadow Rebbe]

great story

[Ebuka Igbokwe]

Thanks